In the wake of Hunger Games’ popularity, it was inevitable that publishers would seek out new stories to capitalize on young readers’ dystopian interest.  While most have been thankfully relegated to the trash bin of history, one series has managed to resonate: the Divergent series by Veronica Roth, a self-avowed Christian.  The last book in her three book series appeared this fall, just in time to prepare fans for the movie version coming out in March of 2014. 

Hayley Schoeppler, our youngest reader on staff (she’s just heading in to college), kindly agreed to review the final book, Allegiant, for us.  So before the media blitz for the movie hits next year and you hand your kids a copy, we hope you’ll take a moment and consider some of her criticisms.  Take it away, Hayley! 

Allegiant, by Veronica Roth.  Katherine Tegen Books, 2013, 544 pages.  Age/interest level: 14 – up.

“Have you read Allegiant?”

I was prepared for the question, and I quickly fielded it.  “No, don’t tell me!”

My questioner, a fellow-book lover and Divergent enthusiast, simply said, “It’s sad!”

It was not the response I expected, but it encapsulates the disappointment many feel after reading Allegiant.  With the first book arriving on the big screen in March, this series only promises to gain in popularity.  One can only wonder, with this popularity, why Veronica Roth chose to end her series in such a way.

Begun in Divergent, readers have followed the life and decisions of Beatrice, “Tris” Prior in a future Chicago governed by factions.  These factions, each highlighting a particular strength, crumbled at the end of Insurgent, yet readers were left with a cliff-hanger that promised an exciting ending to the series.  It is one that Allegiant fails to deliver.

The book opens with the city under the dictatorial rule of Evelyn Johnson who is also the mother of Tris’ love interest, Tobias.  Evelyn is intent on squelching the faction system and all who oppose her leadership.  Key among the opposition is the Allegiant, a group of former faction members, banded together with the common goal of restoring the faction system and carrying out the “mission” shared at the end of Insurgent.  This mission is to reach and help the outside, unknown world that lies beyond the guarded borders of the city.

What Tris, Tobias, and other Allegiant members soon uncover on this mission will shock characters and readers alike.  The people living in Chicago are actually a group of genetically damaged individuals who have been a multi-generational experiment.  The experiment’s every movement is monitored by the United States government.  The instability of Chicago’s society is threatening the funding for the experiment.  As a result, the leaders of the experiment are ready to take drastic measures unless Tris and her group are able to stop them in time.

Under this barrage of information, the story falters.  Readers are left sorting through details and issues that sound suspiciously gleaned from today’s headlines.  Gone is the action that kept readers turning pages, and there is little to redeem it in character development and interaction.

The romance between Tobias and Tris continues, and from steamy kisses it has progressed to body-locking PDA.  Every romantic encounter is described in excessive detail,

 . . . he pulls his shirt out from under my hands so that I am touching his bare skin.

Despite the continual passionate embraces, there is no explicit sex, yet one scene ends up with both characters in bed, without shirts, asleep together.  Apparently, they just slept close together, but the ecstatic wording from Tris’ perspective seem to indicate much more than that.

Add to this a continual dose of violence, casual profanity, and a search for answers that are never discovered.  Christian readers will be disappointed to find that Allegiant never answers the dangling question of God, hinted at in the previous books.  Instead, the series seems to offer redemption and answers apart from God.

Characters discuss things like sacrifice, forgiveness, and living with grief and loss, but the wording is stilted and uninspiring.  Instead of character’s thoughts, these discussions and opinions come across as thinly veiled lecturing.

Life damages us, every one.  We can’t escape that damage.  But now, I am also learning this: We can be mended.  We mend each other.


As Allegiant draws to a close, Tris choses a path that seems to lead to death.  It is a choice that any reader who knows Tris will expect, with the knowledge that she is Tris, and she can survive.  And she does survive, but not for long.

Can I be forgiven for all I’ve done to get here?

I want to be.

I can.

I believe it.

And with these words, Tris–along with the promise of Roth’s early novels–is gone.

Since finishing Allegiant, the words of Sydney Carton in Tale of Two Cities have continually come to my mind.

It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far, far better rest that I go to than I have ever known.

Few writers can create and kill a character successfully.  Charles Dickens was one.  Veronica Roth is not, and Beatrice Prior is no Sydney Carton.  It is a sad story, indeed.

  • Worldview/moral value: 3
  • Literary Value: 3

Thanks, Hayley!  Readers may also want to check out Janie’s review of Divergent. We also touch on the Divergent series in our podcast, From Ender’s Game to Hunger Games, which looks at the dystopian/sci-fi trend in a more comprehensive way.

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Discussion Question: If you read the series, what did you think about the ending?  Did you see any evidence of Roth’s Christianity in the conclusion?  We’d love to hear what you think!



3 Responses to Allegiant

  1. Liz April 16, 2014 at 7:47 pm #

    I’m so glad i didn’t waste my time reading it! I got through the first book, and it was excellent! I couldn’t wait to follow along their journey and enjoy more of tris and tobias’s relationship. I would have been alright with some other characters in the series, but not her! (i wouldn’t have enjoyed tobias’s death either) Now that i know it all ends like this, i won’t even bother finishing the series.

  2. Hayley S. December 16, 2013 at 10:00 pm #

    Thank you, Joe, for commenting! Like you, I found the first two books quite promising and then along came Allegiant. Great points regarding the story; it’s definitely hard to accept given, as you say, the flaws. Better luck on the next series you encounter!

  3. Joe December 16, 2013 at 5:49 pm #

    Well done review, completely agree! I’m okay with Tris dying, it makes sense. What doesn’t make sense is their first plan to get the death serum is a suicide mission and no other mission is discussed?… Then Tris conveniently leaves her gun in the hallway, a dauntless trained soldier who’s made it through everything she’s been through just forgets her gun, too convenient for the author who’s sole mission is to murder Tris (not sacrifice). Tris’s sacrifice would’ve been if she died from the death serum, not surviving the (knowing) death serum to be shot by an untrained political leader with two miraculous death shots from a wheel chair while Tris is a moving target. Also Caleb was in need of redemption and that was stolen from him by Tris, and now he also has to live with the fact his sister took his place, wouldn’t he be better off dead? This book was so dan frustrating, the first two books were so promising, and I was so very disappointed in this book. I don’t think I’ll be reading any of Veronica’s next work, until I read the last book of that series, she’s lost my respect as a reader. I wish her nothing but the best, and the film series, but I won’t be watching any of the movies or those Four story things in the future.

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